hmm! I absolutely LOVE it mate! Its great, and im very impressed that it your first time :D
Sambrook the otter(The artist) 
Need anything? 16:00, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
Wow.[]
Your first time? Really good. AWESOME. !!!!!!!! Shieldmaiden 
Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 16:06, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
Thank you xD[]
Yay, positive reviews, any criticisms? I just hate it when people just go yay and bottle up their negatives, it won't help me improve if I don't hear what's wrong
Sleepy Zaran Rhulain 
Message me! 16:20, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
hmm[]
head to narrow, snout upturns, fil body out a bit more.
Is that an unstrung bow or a dual bladed sword? Shieldmaiden Tell Me Something I Don't Know! 16:48, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
the tail is a bit blocky... but other than that and what shield maiden said, it great :)
Sambrook the otter(The artist) Need anything? 21:26, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
Hmm[]
no offense, but its a bit...I don't know. Awesome for a first try. My first otter, squirrel, mouse, etc. were horrible. KIU, Zaran.--Pinedance Coneslinger
Talk! 23:36, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
Whoa[]
Your drawing is good! Mine are bad, though it's a bit out of proportion. Mauran Axestripe 
Eulaliaaaaaa! 23:47, 14 February 2009 (UTC)
True[]
I should've filled out the body a bit more, because when I first started to draw it, I thought I wouldn't have enough room. What do you mean when you say the snout is upturned Shield? Oh yea, that's a double bladed sword, a lil secret, it was orginally one bladed ;D
The tail is a bit blocky, surprisingly just placing where the tail goes was surprisingly hard, if my scanner wasn't so cheap, you would see the parts where it is heavily smudged and erased multiple times
I know what you mean Pine, when I finished and looked at it, I thought it was missing something else
Like I said Mauren, I also thought it was disporprotional, the legs don't match the rest of the body
THANK YOU EVERYONE
Sleepy Zaran Rhulain Message me! 02:12, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
things that always make a picture look great is great shading.
Sambrook the otter(The artist) Need anything? 02:58, 15 February 2009 (UTC)
P.s. something I see after looking at it is.... It looks liek my first one a bit. cept a bit better :)
The hips are a little bit skinny.Emerlis Ligamenta 03:12, 15 February 2009 (UTC)