This is only my first story, so please be critical but not too critical.This also only a sort of an experimental thing, so it migh not be too long. If you want to be updated, please leave your signature or a link to your talk page in the update section on my user page. Thank you!
A figure stood, hidden by shadows despite his bright, red cloak. An unsuspecting beetle crawled up his leg, but the mysterious figure did nothing to betray himself. He simply stood, still as a rock, barely even breathing.
He watched silently, his eagle-sharp eyes missing almost nothing, even though only a fraction of Redwall could be seen through the trees. He calmly watched a hare walking along the wall tops, with an older mouse who seemed quite weak. The rumours h…
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